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thunder is spooky especially when you are not use to it

posted by lustorlove on September 21, 2009 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

The heart is resilient.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 18, 2009 at 8:04 PM | link to this | reply

Amazing read the same as the tears rinse the soul, up lifting

posted by Mystereo on September 18, 2009 at 2:49 PM | link to this | reply

There is a crescendo of emotion  that crashes with the thunder's roll and splashes the raindrops to soothe .... Beauty- Marta Excellent poem.

posted by merkie on September 18, 2009 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

 Great writing confirms it love. BC-A, Bill*s Cyberspace Hotlink

posted by BC-A on September 18, 2009 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

...jumping through my pen onto the blank page...
So many things suddenly make one feel the need to write something down.
Love this poem.

posted by TAPS. on September 18, 2009 at 6:23 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice poem For me the thunder reminds me in the presence of God. It is a warning of his power, but after it comes the rain, and that is the blessing that was given to man. Like always I love your writings !!!

posted by chuck_ibrahim on September 18, 2009 at 3:15 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome - I like how the rain cleanses and washes aways all the fears..a beautiful poem.

posted by shobana on September 18, 2009 at 12:06 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

The insides of your soul pouring itself out on a blank page, the page bearing its weight, and then the pure waters of the rain, with which all began with its distant thunder, washing it all away, completing the cycle! W O N D Er F U L L!!

posted by abanerjee on September 17, 2009 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

rain washes pain away!

posted by 9STAR on September 17, 2009 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

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posted by 9STAR on September 17, 2009 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply