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"hoping to fill that empty gap
that lies between selfless and self-indulgence" All events have a soliloquey your words are a fantasic song

posted by merkie on September 18, 2009 at 8:00 AM | link to this | reply

Strange but true- strangers step in to fill the gap left open by friends!

posted by hardilaziz on September 18, 2009 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

Although monologing(?) is a great way to vent it can also be so very
depressing - I am guilty of doing this on occasion but try to keep it to a minimum; this is a beautiful albeit rather sad piece my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on September 18, 2009 at 4:51 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha ~.~
Great write -- truth in every line...but the last line is classic. Thanks so much for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on September 18, 2009 at 4:10 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha - The mystery is exciting to everyone else but the mysterious. I always have monologues with myself too..lol. Loved the poem.

posted by shobana on September 17, 2009 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

I've felt that empty feeling a time or two.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 17, 2009 at 4:21 PM | link to this | reply

So many people, all of them so busy...nobody has time for anyone else.  The reality is, if people took a moment to give a damn about others and really listen...most people would be a whole lot happier and less stressed out.  Very true-to-life piece you have here!

posted by Ryan_Morrow on September 17, 2009 at 10:16 AM | link to this | reply

I have a monalogue all day long

posted by lustorlove on September 17, 2009 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha
" ... come to realize a conversation of one is nothing more than a monologue of emptiness and bittersweet". Now, this is what I call 'MaRvelOuS'.

posted by abanerjee on September 17, 2009 at 8:50 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful..the  in-between and longing where mystery and stability dance.

posted by yellowrose55 on September 17, 2009 at 8:50 AM | link to this | reply

That's a great quote, and you kicked it up a notch with your beautiful words.

posted by TAPS. on September 17, 2009 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

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