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- Go to My Sailor (a lament in Villanelle form)
A wonderfully creative twist. This is one of my favorites of your poetry.
There are so many...
posted by
yellowrose55
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September 16, 2009
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You already know how much I love the ocean and sailing away....Very beautiful poem, I let myself be gently rocked by it....
posted by
auslander
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September 15, 2009
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Shelly
I have to admit this one is very close to my heart; it is not by chance that I live by the sea! Awesome write my friend as always; many thanks and blessings always
posted by
mariaki
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September 15, 2009
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simply lovely
posted by
MiaElla
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September 14, 2009
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Another gem!
posted by
hardilaziz
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September 14, 2009
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Catch the wave love. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
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September 14, 2009
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Shelly
You have captured well the allure of the sea - it's true, once you have succumbed, you can never forget her...I think in some of us she invokes a 'genetic memory' of where we all came from...
posted by
Nautikos
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September 14, 2009
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Shelly
You have done another wonderous - slightly secretive - sad and yet beautiful poem. I am in awe of your talent. God bless.
posted by
Justi
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September 14, 2009
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Sam - a beautiful melancholic poem. you've captured the yearning so well.
posted by
shobana
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September 14, 2009
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Very nice
posted by
chuck_ibrahim
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September 14, 2009
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Good job Shelly, writing a lovely poem in a difficult form!
posted by
myrrhage_
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September 14, 2009
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cant fiught the strength of the sea
posted by
lustorlove
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September 14, 2009
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splendid!
posted by
Samantha39
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September 14, 2009
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melted my heart
It is a beautiful description of what everyone has experienced, but couldnt verbalize
i loved it
posted by
Tzippy
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September 14, 2009
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Fantastic outpourings of a heart welled in both Love and Sorrow.
+ 2.
posted by
abanerjee
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September 14, 2009
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Sam
Beautiful!
posted by
Troosha
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September 14, 2009
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These are difficult to write . Excellent poetry Shelly. A sad tale!
posted by
merkie
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September 14, 2009
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Very poignant and well expressed, Shelly! Thanks for your comment!
posted by
snowview
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September 14, 2009
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