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Oh, so good! It has sent me on love's heavenly ride, Nileangel.
posted by
anib
on September 15, 2009 at 7:13 PM
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A passionate trip through love. BC-A, Bill’s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on September 11, 2009 at 11:09 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on September 11, 2009 at 8:26 PM
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Not too bad...not exactly my cup-o-tea and there were some mistakes, but, based on the piece itself, you have a fairly decent fluidity of pace and that made it enjoyable to read! My only advice is to proofread a little more before posting. Good luck!
posted by
Ryan_Morrow
on September 11, 2009 at 7:59 PM
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