Comments on A Hornet on Glass, A Poem by Larry Golicz, 09/10/09

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Not too bad..has a nice rhythm and buzzes right along!  Whimsical at times, but I feel there is something missing...

posted by Ryan_Morrow on September 14, 2009 at 10:01 PM | link to this | reply

Sorry, Larry ~.~
...anyway  -- nice write! Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on September 11, 2009 at 5:58 PM | link to this | reply

Larry ~.

posted by soulspeaker on September 11, 2009 at 5:57 PM | link to this | reply

I really like this quatrain:

I wonder over its dauntless will, 

    Telling me now my heart to fill,

Born anew of someone who

    Knew my soul through and through?

sam

posted by sam444 on September 11, 2009 at 7:22 AM | link to this | reply