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I loved this Sam!

In these turbulent times: risk, venture, gain and loss have become an integral part of our vocabulary. I never watched the economic bulletins in the past but now i find myself listening with interest. Your poem took those dry and dreaded words and gave them a new life and the layout was beautiful.

 

 Great work
 

posted by lindo on September 11, 2009 at 1:20 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, it's all about risks and survival of the fittest!

posted by hardilaziz on September 10, 2009 at 6:34 PM | link to this | reply

 I like how you personify risk love. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst

posted by BC-A on September 10, 2009 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply

A very pleasant look & a great poem to accompany!

posted by shamasehar on September 10, 2009 at 2:34 AM | link to this | reply

Shelly

I have tried many times but whatever you've written won't show on my screen!!!!!!!! I am sure it is excellent though Many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on September 10, 2009 at 1:46 AM | link to this | reply

I agree with lustor... Very different for you but hey it is a "venture" and I like it!  By the way Lion wants me to tell you he is fine and will be back on Blogit "soonish" :-)  He misses you tons as he does all of us.  Take care of you :-)  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on September 9, 2009 at 7:21 PM | link to this | reply

that one was really different  I am not sure about it

posted by lustorlove on September 9, 2009 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

Nice.

posted by Nileangel on September 9, 2009 at 5:12 PM | link to this | reply

You have touched on something here

It's just how it feels with my publishing ventures. i liken it to a tightrope walk. You must stay on the rope, for it's a long way to fall. Love the look of this work too!

 

posted by Azur on September 9, 2009 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply

Sam - Well, what can I say.  The book of life..the risk and a chance for a venture. Sounds like so much to delve into and I have'nt. Just lovely my Sam.

posted by shobana on September 9, 2009 at 3:25 PM | link to this | reply

I like the layout too! A creative poem.

posted by mariposa75 on September 9, 2009 at 2:38 PM | link to this | reply

Very impressive layout Shelly; how did you do it? The poem reminded me of something that a Danish philosopher Søren Kirkegaard wrote about how to dare to do something made you feel for a split second you were losing everything, but not to do dare was the same as losing your entire life.  

posted by elinjo on September 9, 2009 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply