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As we sail into the sunset with the passion your words instill.... Great poem Shelly!
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merkie
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September 9, 2009
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you write very well...
posted by
Samantha39
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September 9, 2009
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Use of oxymorons makes it even more remarkable!
posted by
hardilaziz
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September 9, 2009
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Very powerful poem
Sure you got the talent in writing. It is hard for me to believe that you are going to stop writing. Keep them coming. Chuck
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chuck_ibrahim
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September 9, 2009
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Marvelous and powerful work Shelly
I wouldn't even attempt something like this! A true artist my friend; many blessings and thanks always
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mariaki
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September 9, 2009
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I'd have to agree with Calia powerful. Powerful words, powerful emotions making one feel alive!
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Nileangel
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September 8, 2009
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Powerful!
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calia14
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September 8, 2009
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sam ~.~
Magnificent! ...and, at your suggestion, I will not even attempt this. Thanks for sharing (and for the lesson), dear teacher. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
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soulspeaker
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September 8, 2009
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This moves the soul to follow your lines love. BC-A, Bill’s Avant-Garde Collection
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BC-A
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September 8, 2009
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Shelly
After this
tour-de-force I need a scotch...
(even if it comes in a martini glass)...
posted by
Nautikos
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September 8, 2009
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Sam - A remarkable work Sam and no we will not cower or fail..you are indeed a true poet..have a lovely night my Sam.
posted by
shobana
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September 8, 2009
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"we will not cower! Nor surround!"
Yep, maybe Carradine could do it justice, or the late Vincent Price...all I did was scare my wife...
..:)...
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Rumor
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September 8, 2009
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[Rondeau Redouble
Very controlled yet free flowing. I date myself, but I would have loved to hear the late, great John Carradine, with his magnificent baritone voice and Shakespearian delivery would have chewed on this bone. Lots of marrow to be gnawed.
joab
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joab3
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September 8, 2009
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