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Story of a lifetime throbbing with intensity. Fabulous work!

posted by hardilaziz on September 9, 2009 at 7:07 AM | link to this | reply

I read this earlier today and have just come back to read it again. It is valuable to hear the two different perceptions of the situation. In the third part when you wrote a joint point of view, I anticipated they would be able to work together. However the last part seemed more pessimistic. I thought it was a wistful, but beautiful poem.
Thanks for leaving such a kind and supportive comment on my page. 

posted by elinjo on September 8, 2009 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

Shelly, this is wonderful; I will have to read it again slowly to savor it! Thanks very much for your warm comment on my post; my blog here is my first ever attempt at posting, so your encouragement and support from day 1 has meant more than I can say! Many thanks and blessings! Nita.

posted by snowview on September 8, 2009 at 5:28 AM | link to this | reply

What exquisite four dimensional portals! Great work!

posted by shamasehar on September 8, 2009 at 3:15 AM | link to this | reply

I see your eyes on me

posted by lustorlove on September 7, 2009 at 10:42 PM | link to this | reply

I second that WOW!  I got to come back and read this again... I will reserve comments till I do that but for now... Wow my sweet Samie xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on September 7, 2009 at 9:46 PM | link to this | reply

WOW!
Simply WOW!!! Great, Sam, my hats go off to you. Kudos!

posted by Aspire2Inspire on September 7, 2009 at 7:44 PM | link to this | reply

I meant a feast

posted by Azur on September 7, 2009 at 7:33 PM | link to this | reply

Sam444, you have set out a feat today

posted by Azur on September 7, 2009 at 7:33 PM | link to this | reply

Sam444

posted by Azur on September 7, 2009 at 7:32 PM | link to this | reply

Sam - quite a breathtaking view from four different portals. just awesome and the green eyes says so much too. loved it my Sam.

posted by shobana on September 7, 2009 at 5:51 PM | link to this | reply

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