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Story of a lifetime throbbing with intensity. Fabulous work!
posted by
hardilaziz
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September 9, 2009
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I read this earlier today and have just come back to read it again. It is valuable to hear the two different perceptions of the situation. In the third part when you wrote a joint point of view, I anticipated they would be able to work together. However the last part seemed more pessimistic. I thought it was a wistful, but beautiful poem.
Thanks for leaving such a kind and supportive comment on my page.
posted by
elinjo
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September 8, 2009
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Shelly, this is wonderful; I will have to read it again slowly to savor it! Thanks very much for your warm comment on my post; my blog here is my first ever attempt at posting, so your encouragement and support from day 1 has meant more than I can say! Many thanks and blessings! Nita.
posted by
snowview
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September 8, 2009
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What exquisite four dimensional portals! Great work!
posted by
shamasehar
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September 8, 2009
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I see your eyes on me
posted by
lustorlove
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September 7, 2009
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I second that WOW! I got to come back and read this again... I will reserve comments till I do that but for now... Wow my sweet Samie xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
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September 7, 2009
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WOW!
Simply WOW!!! Great, Sam, my hats go off to you. Kudos!
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
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September 7, 2009
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I meant a feast
posted by
Azur
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September 7, 2009
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Sam444, you have set out a feat today
posted by
Azur
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September 7, 2009
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Sam444
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Azur
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September 7, 2009
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Sam - quite a breathtaking view from four different portals. just awesome and the green eyes says so much too. loved it my Sam.
posted by
shobana
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September 7, 2009
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