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Welcome to blogit. I am enjoying reading your poems.
posted by
mariposa75
on September 27, 2009 at 4:12 PM
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I think that's a very good expression of what Born Again means to those who follow that path. I don't, believing in a higher being of my own imagination is enough for me, but I certinly can understn the need and symbolism of Born Agains.
posted by
vogue
on September 9, 2009 at 5:37 AM
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Amen! Very poignant with wonderful realization! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 8, 2009 at 9:46 AM
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Bright and inspiring. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on September 7, 2009 at 4:16 PM
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Re: my poem, "Birth"
I'm actually referring to spiritual rebirth in this poem, being born again as a Christian. A few years ago, I became a follower of Christ and I wrote this poem about what it felt like to be born in the spiritual sense. Words like "in the dark, reaching out" represent the desire I had to escape my life of sin. "A force that thrives on hiding me" refers to the devil's intentions to stop me from accepting Jesus into my life. Having faith in Jesus and believing in his promise of eternal salvation in Heaven is what it's all about: "needing air and water, but the promised gift is so much more". Thank you so much for reading my poem and for welcoming me to Blogit! Peace!
posted by
darkly
on September 7, 2009 at 1:15 PM
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Ricky ~.~
...a very apt description of being "born again." Nice! Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding. ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on September 7, 2009 at 1:08 PM
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Ah! sweet transformation.
posted by
Nileangel
on September 7, 2009 at 12:43 PM
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You seem to be referring to reincarnation in the last lines, am I mistaken? Welcome to Blogit. I enjoyed reading your poem.
posted by
elinjo
on September 7, 2009 at 12:39 PM
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