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Shelly
There was one line that really caught my attention: "in retrospect I always think I planned it this way" - and it occurred to me that we unconsciously plan our lives more than we think - that often the things that 'happen to us' didn't
just happen, but were planned by us...
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Nautikos
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September 5, 2009
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posted by
shamasehar
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September 5, 2009
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Nice messin with words it turned out really nice. I played in the moon last night.
posted by
Nileangel
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September 5, 2009
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Very appropriate title. Great composition!
posted by
hardilaziz
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September 5, 2009
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Nice
Although I have a kind of phobia from at the sky high up! I guess this made the poem more relevant
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lindo
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September 4, 2009
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You call that messing around? I call that art! We have a full moon right now which means I am irrisistably drawn to it all night long and can´'t sleep a wink for 2 nights. I don´t know why, but its always the same.
posted by
vogue
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September 4, 2009
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Twinkle, twinkle, like the imagery.
God Bless!
posted by
dougspoetry
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September 4, 2009
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A different view of the twilight and darkening sky! Well done -imagery!
posted by
merkie
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September 4, 2009
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I agree with Justi!
posted by
calia14
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September 4, 2009
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the moon will be full tonight
posted by
lustorlove
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September 4, 2009
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posted by
Ariala
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September 4, 2009
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Sam
Beautiful things happen when you go to messing with imagery.
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Justi
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September 4, 2009
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posted by
9STAR
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September 4, 2009
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