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mmmm, this reminds me of lazing by the River Wabash.
posted by
myrrhage_
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September 4, 2009
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There definitely is something calming about a lazy river.
posted by
TAPS.
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September 3, 2009
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I love the calm, too! Nice imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
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September 3, 2009
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Very beautiful poem Troosha
and after my hectic day yesterday just what I needed - that calm and peaceful feeling! Many blessings and thanks
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mariaki
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September 3, 2009
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Effervescent as ever!
posted by
hardilaziz
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September 2, 2009
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Troosha
Beautiful, I would say you have your 'foul aligned'. Your beautiful hair is that of a passionate poet, I love it.
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Justi
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September 2, 2009
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This is an original expression of keeping moving during the week sweetheart. Excellent! BC-A, Bill*s Cyberspace Hotlink
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BC-A
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September 2, 2009
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Duck
I Loved your poem. Ducks (in a row) are the words in your poem.calmness,moving continually Life. LV. FEmia
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fememefeme
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September 2, 2009
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I have just read-'Rainfall' followed by 'Calm'.A truly Beautiful pair
Troosha! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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September 2, 2009
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I really like this, I like the shorter poems
posted by
lustorlove
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September 2, 2009
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Outstanding !!! Your poem has a very nice flow
Thank you for sharing.
posted by
chuck_ibrahim
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September 1, 2009
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Such tranquility I get from reading this.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
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September 1, 2009
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procrastination is not putting your work down on paper, sorry I read your about me. your work and words put so eloquently together will never die it is like your lazy river forever flowing. beautiful poem. I was forced to put it to music.
posted by
RITE2SPIN
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September 1, 2009
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Sort of like the calm of early fall before the winter storms.
posted by
Kabu
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September 1, 2009
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Smoothing the wrinkles out of the morning! outstanding depth of relections!
posted by
merkie
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September 1, 2009
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The duck seems so calm swimming, but it is the result of hectic paddling underneath. The psychological undertone of your poem has a lot to teach one that is willing to be taught.
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abanerjee
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September 1, 2009
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Fantastic! This is one of my faves!
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calia14
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September 1, 2009
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