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Covering every one of the five senses, I see.
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FormerStudentIntern
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September 1, 2009
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What a Beautiful write! Don't be sad-be thankful-that you have some
wonderful memories and they are still alive! Treasure them .Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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September 1, 2009
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I'm having visions of white magnolias and live oaks with Spanish moss swaying in the breeze. Great family memories shared in a wonderful way.
posted by
TAPS.
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September 1, 2009
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Sinome
So nostalgic - and it inspired a haiku...
posted by
Nautikos
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September 1, 2009
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Hauntingly beautiful Sinome
although we can't go back the good memories will always be with us; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
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September 1, 2009
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Brilliant write Marta This ends with a teardrop shining in the eye and a sense of sadness in letting go.The essense of memories fills your heart again.Poignant!
posted by
merkie
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August 31, 2009
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Be detached....if not all changes will be as death!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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August 31, 2009
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terrific poem
posted by
Samantha39
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August 31, 2009
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very nice and different from your normal poems, not that they arent nice too, jsut different
posted by
lustorlove
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August 31, 2009
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Sinome ~.~
Painfully true is the fact that we can only keep the memories...all else fades (and then, sometimes, so do the memories.) A great write! Thanks for sharing.Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
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soulspeaker
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August 31, 2009
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Sinome
I just got carried away with realistic painting of your jasmine scent, went places with you, felt the poignancy of the thoughts, and then, breathless, came back typing a comment to you. Fantastic!
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abanerjee
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August 31, 2009
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That's what I have heard, one can never truly go back home! Outstanding imagery, Sweetie! Love you the very mostest!!!!! sammie
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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sam444
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August 31, 2009
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