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hardilaziz
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September 2, 2009
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I find it lovely how you condense your thoughts. It comes across as a product of the simple and lovely life that you live. Very good, carry on love. BC-A, Top of the Stairs
posted by
BC-A
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August 30, 2009
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very nice
posted by
lustorlove
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August 30, 2009
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Condense the endless into 10 lines...?
Troosha, be reticent if you must, but believe me, if anyone can do a really beautiful job of it, it's you!
posted by
Raphael222
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August 30, 2009
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What more need be said! Perfection in the unsaid! Brilliant Troosha, Love Easher xx
posted by
Easher
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August 30, 2009
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In poetry what is not said sometimes assumes more importance than what is. And you have excelled here in your last three lines. Just loved it!
posted by
abanerjee
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August 29, 2009
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So tough it is to do that.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
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August 29, 2009
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Mission accomplished! BRAVO!!! sam
posted by
sam444
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August 29, 2009
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That's brilliant Troosha--and very well done! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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August 29, 2009
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Ahhh but you did it so well... That is the one thing I have enormous trouble doing... "Condensing" is not one of my abilities loll. Beautifully done Troosha... you made me smile too xoxo
posted by
Sinome
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August 29, 2009
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I hate having to cut. One historical book I wrote forever on needs half cut
out how can I be so ruthless but it was a character that invited herself into the story and she just doesn't belong.
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Kabu
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August 29, 2009
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posted by
9STAR
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August 29, 2009
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LOL.......
But, you managed to do it anyway........is this based on the bucket theory? The near impossible attempt to put 10 gallons of crap in a 5 gallon bucket?
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
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August 29, 2009
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:-) That made me smile...so much of our writing starts long and then
we cut, cut, cut ... condensing can be a hard thing but usually proves worthy.
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Ariala
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August 29, 2009
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