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Re: there are some conflict there, but this person is influenced very much

in my life........when I loose the hope in life, I get a lift from this soul for next moment......

for years and years.....this person help me live .....and try to help me solve my issues without expecting nothing......I mean nothing at all......

posted by Star5_ on August 26, 2009 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Re: When one really loves someone...whomever I wrote this never compell nor

compete with me in any form......but there's a true mystery behind it and there are few things I can never explain with words......This was written for a friend of mine for a long time.......and  to my music who helped me survive me from the hell of agony and saved me truly from the death .....so if you owes your life to someone that deep...........they never expect nothing from you......

at least a true poem to express.....

if I think of everything between this person .....all I could remember the sweetness of fresh air, jumping on river and getting chilled......running up to the floral gardens......and listening to my favorite songs........that beautiful friendship.....

So.....I put that thought in imagery and wrote this poem today to keep me alive for the day.....because I had such a bad day...... 

posted by Star5_ on August 26, 2009 at 8:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: thank you....

posted by Star5_ on August 26, 2009 at 8:32 PM | link to this | reply

 This love poem’s driven by conflict powerfully love. BC-A, Top of the Stairs

posted by BC-A on August 26, 2009 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

When one really loves someone...
one doesn't compete / battle with them, so where's the question of surrender?

posted by ash_pradhan on August 26, 2009 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

9star - beautiful thoughts here.

posted by shobana on August 26, 2009 at 4:47 PM | link to this | reply

9star - beautiful thoughts here.

posted by shobana on August 26, 2009 at 4:47 PM | link to this | reply