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Your beautiful poem is outstanding...

There is a woman

In my dreams

Her name is Love.

 

She is Joy,

Lovely to behold

Waiting for me,

Always there -

Sometimes blonde, brunette

Or fair -

Always warm, wise and wonderful,

Kind and good...

 

Perfect, through and through.

Who is this woman?

 

She is you!

posted by Raphael222 on August 29, 2009 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

That ending leaves so much to ponder.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 25, 2009 at 6:26 PM | link to this | reply

You Too...

I've come across many a written word that made me want to bounce off of it and do the same as you Sinome.  Lovely way to recognize somebody words that took you to a place.

posted by LaMerci on August 24, 2009 at 3:55 PM | link to this | reply

Wow Marta excellent beyond expression. You never know.

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posted by merkie on August 24, 2009 at 2:04 PM | link to this | reply

beautifully written and I would love to have somany people clammering for

my work...peopleI may never meet.

posted by Kabu on August 24, 2009 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply

what a melodious cascade... beeeeeutiful!

posted by bythewindowsill on August 24, 2009 at 11:50 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Phewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! cold shower time.

posted by WileyJohn on August 24, 2009 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

This is absolutley enchanting

and so romantic - I love this, I think it's one of your best. 

posted by lionreign on August 24, 2009 at 8:23 AM | link to this | reply

"They come alive and seduce me,
dance in front of me like fire,"     Love those lines, and what a gorgeously flowing poem. Your poem sizzles.

posted by yellowrose55 on August 24, 2009 at 7:39 AM | link to this | reply

What a lovely poem for Blogit.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on August 24, 2009 at 7:16 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely lyrical quality

posted by malcolm on August 24, 2009 at 5:45 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome, it is a nice poem that comes deep from the heart I love it.

posted by chuck_ibrahim on August 24, 2009 at 4:40 AM | link to this | reply

This is strikingly beautiful! KUDOS Sweetie! LOVE YOU, too! sammie

posted by sam444 on August 23, 2009 at 9:16 PM | link to this | reply

awesome!

posted by 9STAR on August 23, 2009 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply