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beautiful imagery You are very special you know your poetry is so deep

posted by Kabu on August 22, 2009 at 7:28 PM | link to this | reply

One of your best yet Ariala... I just loved it!  "Maybe there is life after the slow death of broken dreams... " What a beautiful thought... just the right line to end such a wonderful poem.

posted by Sinome on August 22, 2009 at 1:26 PM | link to this | reply

I am impressed at your skill in description!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on August 22, 2009 at 10:37 AM | link to this | reply

Ariala

Indeed there IS love after broken dreams or abandonment.  You take your reader on such a daunting trip into the “depths”….

posted by Troosha on August 22, 2009 at 7:30 AM | link to this | reply

Great!

posted by hardilaziz on August 22, 2009 at 5:18 AM | link to this | reply

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