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scent mango makes you dreamy, romantic......
posted by
9STAR
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August 23, 2009
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I feel as though you sucked me in and I went along for the ride.
posted by
TAPS.
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August 22, 2009
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I hate the feeling emptiness brings.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
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August 22, 2009
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Sinome
I could get totally lost in an environment of mango! This was a beautifully written poem. The smells, sounds, colors and feeling of the rain were so strong. I love this. Be blessed. xoxoxox
posted by
Justi
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August 21, 2009
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Emptiness can be all consuming! Loved this imagery with its excellent cadence! How are you feeling, and how is the recovery? Love you!!!! sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
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August 21, 2009
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I really miss the Australian Mango. Great poem sweetie luv.
posted by
Kabu
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August 21, 2009
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Such a beautifuly vivid poem
I felt that I was the storm right alongside you.
I too once wished never to feel empty again... my wish was answered when somebody showed me how to fill the empty places with myself 
posted by
lionreign
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August 21, 2009
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Your sensory details bring the words to life; just wonderful! Thanks very much for your warm comment on my post and prayers for Ashish--am truly grateful. I hope you're feeling stronger every day; lovely to have you back. Take care! Love, Nita.
posted by
snowview
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August 21, 2009
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Sinome
How can anyone who writes such words as… I felt a soft summer breeze, perfumed with the scent of ripe mangoes, combing through my hair, ever feel “empty”. Powerful and engaging write, Sinome. Well done!
posted by
Troosha
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August 21, 2009
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Gripping words and such beautiful imagery!
posted by
Ariala
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August 21, 2009
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Nice to see you back home my dear Sinome
and I see you are back with a bang! Awesome post; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
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August 21, 2009
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No mango scent but the fragrance of your words soothes my tired eyes ..
sigh...lovely write!
posted by
merkie
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August 20, 2009
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How coincidental...I just had a mango :)!
Welcome back Sinome...and back you are!! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
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August 20, 2009
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