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Accepting the loss and anticipating the revival , Never hopeless and always cared for. Patience arrives with peace?!
posted by
merkie
on August 17, 2009 at 10:57 PM
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What we need is hope. This can be found at the end of the tunnel when the pain goes away and life shines with it's beauty and love
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posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on August 17, 2009 at 10:11 PM
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I toolike poems that end on a note of hope. Wonderful poem.
posted by
Kabu
on August 17, 2009 at 7:09 PM
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this is so very vivid
and I like the continuation of hope in the last line - it changes the whole poem. There is no thing which does not contain a lesson we must learn... but sometimes those lessons are very difficult
posted by
lionreign
on August 17, 2009 at 1:53 PM
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Amazing imagery! It is hopeful at the end for we all find our own egress when we so desire! My son is in town! He came back early from this last season because he had worked through herring season! He had intended to surprise me, but, I moved! Got him, lol! I have been hanging out with him for the past few days and enjoying every minute! We had our first bar-b-que and horseshoe pitching with teams, I think we are set through fall! It was great fun to just sit and talk, too! Peace and blessing, Mariaki! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on August 17, 2009 at 9:34 AM
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very nice one......
posted by
Star5_
on August 17, 2009 at 8:31 AM
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