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have a wonderful weekend too. This was so beautiful and the angel
picture too divine.
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Kabu
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August 15, 2009
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Triggered some memories though I don't have negative feelings about
my first love
posted by
Straightforward
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August 15, 2009
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I doubt Mr Fox was ever sick! You need GOOD MEDICINE as in SOLUTIONS!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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August 14, 2009
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Oooh--very painfull first love mariaki! Very well written! Have a great
weekend! Chris.
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Scramble
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August 14, 2009
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Mariaki
Ouch – but when that first love implodes we do think we’ll never love again and it cuts like a knife. Older and now presumably wiser, we know that after a bit of self-repair we CAN love again…. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
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Troosha
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August 14, 2009
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OO Your poem moves along the points of a timeline. It covers the points of past memories, love then and now, and strikes the points of hurt and finally sorrow: the point of no return. I hope it moves to the future, love. BC-A>ARROW>Funpapers Online
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BC-A
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August 14, 2009
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What a wonderful photograph!
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Raphael222
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August 14, 2009
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