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have a wonderful weekend too. This was so beautiful and the angel
picture too divine.
posted by
Kabu
on August 15, 2009 at 2:01 PM
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Triggered some memories though I don't have negative feelings about
my first love
posted by
Straightforward
on August 15, 2009 at 9:54 AM
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I doubt Mr Fox was ever sick! You need GOOD MEDICINE as in SOLUTIONS!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on August 14, 2009 at 7:07 PM
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Oooh--very painfull first love mariaki! Very well written! Have a great
weekend! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 14, 2009 at 8:55 AM
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Mariaki
Ouch – but when that first love implodes we do think we’ll never love again and it cuts like a knife. Older and now presumably wiser, we know that after a bit of self-repair we CAN love again…. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
posted by
Troosha
on August 14, 2009 at 7:26 AM
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OO Your poem moves along the points of a timeline. It covers the points of past memories, love then and now, and strikes the points of hurt and finally sorrow: the point of no return. I hope it moves to the future, love. BC-A>ARROW>Funpapers Online
posted by
BC-A
on August 14, 2009 at 6:00 AM
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What a wonderful photograph!
posted by
Raphael222
on August 14, 2009 at 5:56 AM
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