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My goodness, this was wonderful! Many lines got my attention, but this was most stunning for me: Mix with me tonight
in moving waters
of this

chalice of gold.
  Awesome, awesome! sam

posted by sam444 on August 12, 2009 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply

VERY SPECIAL THE WORDS AND THE PICTURE WELD TOGETHER
SUPERBLY.

posted by Kabu on August 12, 2009 at 8:12 PM | link to this | reply

The twinkling in the picture grabs the reader's attention, but the words definitely do the picture justice.  I enjoyed that.

posted by TAPS. on August 12, 2009 at 3:32 PM | link to this | reply

Superb work, Lady!

posted by _teddypoet_ on August 12, 2009 at 12:08 PM | link to this | reply

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