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I can read your pain in this poem and I pray you will be well

posted by Kabu on August 10, 2009 at 6:26 PM | link to this | reply

Here's wishing you well again. 

posted by elinjo on August 10, 2009 at 1:50 PM | link to this | reply

Fascinating poem from out of your misery.  I should think that you wouldn't worry about reading others and commenting on them when you are in such pain.  I'm sure that if I were suffering as you do that I would be in my sick bed with blogging the farthest thing from my mind.  We will wait for you for as long as it takes.

posted by TAPS. on August 10, 2009 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

I am puzzeled to why they cant find the reason for the migranes and cure them

posted by lustorlove on August 10, 2009 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

Great work. Just a bit worried about your nagging migraine. Pray for your good health!

posted by hardilaziz on August 10, 2009 at 8:12 AM | link to this | reply

intriguing poem

I love the imagery and the conclusion is just superb

posted by lionreign on August 10, 2009 at 7:31 AM | link to this | reply

Best of wishes to you.  I know this lady who has been
in the ER  so much lately with migraines.  I hope
you feel better soon.

posted by Samantha39 on August 10, 2009 at 5:14 AM | link to this | reply

Hope you're feeling better by the time you read this?

I loved the line 'I realize the fog was of my own creation.' How that resonates.

posted by malcolm on August 10, 2009 at 12:11 AM | link to this | reply

I'm sorry about your migraine.  I get really bad headaches from time to time and my daughter gets migraines.  I will pray for you tonight. 

posted by mariposa75 on August 9, 2009 at 10:23 PM | link to this | reply

I am so sorry. I shall pray for you. I pray you get total relief from those things. I can hear the sax man playing so sweetly after the headache. God bless you.

posted by Justi on August 9, 2009 at 9:04 PM | link to this | reply

Music should never be so cruel. So intriguing and surreal..I pray your pain goes away soon.

posted by yellowrose55 on August 9, 2009 at 9:00 PM | link to this | reply

Sam - i read the other poem first..so the migraine still beseiges you..poor thing. Wonderful poetry, beautifully said. take care sam.

posted by shobana on August 9, 2009 at 6:38 PM | link to this | reply