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Poignant beauty waiting alone in anticipation and hope....pensive poetry !We all wish for better times.
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merkie
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August 6, 2009
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It is always amazing to me what beautiful expressions appear on the screen from a mere human's thoughts. Parts of this sound as if it must have come from an angel.
posted by
TAPS.
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August 5, 2009
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I NEED TO READ THIS AGAIN
posted by
9STAR
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August 5, 2009
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'I know that after everything-always something comes'---hold onto that fact
Sad but so very Beautifull!Chris,
posted by
Scramble
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August 5, 2009
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Beautiful and perceptive!
posted by
snowview
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August 5, 2009
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Very deep.. moving...
..thank you
posted by
MasonGarrett
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August 5, 2009
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so long as it is waiting and when that spark of opportunity comes, on you jump as it carries you on that fun filled rollercoaster.......
posted by
spiderfly
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August 4, 2009
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The movement of your poem gracefully moves us on, feeling refreshed sweetheart. BCA, Bill*s Cyberspace Hotlink
posted by
BC-A
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August 4, 2009
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such agony of waiting.your words ring so true.
posted by
Kabu
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August 4, 2009
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Waiting for the missing facets of life to show up can be long and excruciating. When better can't be done, let the worst continue.....has been my motto for far too long!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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August 4, 2009
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Oh wow, these lines are very haunting:
I sit in the void your absence left
where the memory of what was roams,
and I wait.
Great work!!!
posted by
Ariala
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August 4, 2009
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So many people wait and something good comes.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
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August 4, 2009
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