Comments on haiku no. 28

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Very amusing

posted by Azur on August 31, 2009 at 11:51 PM | link to this | reply

I like the imagery with the whiskers.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 4, 2009 at 5:33 PM | link to this | reply

Naut

Had to read you comment to "get it" - of course... an open door and the cat! Duh, Troosha.

posted by Troosha on August 4, 2009 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

Composing myself
for sleep, ScamperCat becomes
TickleMyFace

posted by Ciel on August 4, 2009 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

oh purrrrrrrrfect . loved it. 

posted by bythewindowsill on August 4, 2009 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

But imagine the intrigue if it were the guy from across the street

did he have a knife.....was this a secret affair and if so with who....you or the missus.....was it a robber......but now we find it was just puss cat. growl 

posted by Kabu on August 3, 2009 at 8:52 PM | link to this | reply

Nautikos - lol. that's quite enlightening to know.lol. I would have been horrified if it was the guy from across the street.lol! That was cute.

posted by shobana on August 3, 2009 at 7:24 PM | link to this | reply

HAHAHA at that last thought you leave with us.
The haiku itself was great. 

posted by TAPS. on August 3, 2009 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply

I hear you loud and clear! I so adore your Haikus! Very cool on the Specialized, that is what my son rides! I, like Auslander, ride Giant! Shelly

posted by sam444 on August 3, 2009 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

Re:

To clear up any possible misunderstanding, shobana, it was the cat, not the guy from across the street...

posted by Nautikos on August 3, 2009 at 7:09 AM | link to this | reply

Nautikos - yeah you're right but whiskers??

posted by shobana on August 3, 2009 at 1:17 AM | link to this | reply

 I love your haiku with feeling. BC-A, Bill*s Cyberspace Hotlink

 

posted by BC-A on August 2, 2009 at 10:55 PM | link to this | reply

I love it! This reminds me of my cat.

posted by yellowrose55 on August 2, 2009 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply