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Awesome Sinome!

Such is life for so many; you have captured daily life perfectly; excellent; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on July 31, 2009 at 4:41 AM | link to this | reply

Sad sometimes, but how true.

posted by LostInLife on July 31, 2009 at 4:10 AM | link to this | reply

Indeed, tomorrow is another day!

posted by snowview on July 31, 2009 at 2:43 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome - just another day so aptly told. Been through everything you listed there.

posted by shobana on July 30, 2009 at 10:59 PM | link to this | reply

I really like this little story of yours

posted by lustorlove on July 30, 2009 at 7:24 PM | link to this | reply

We call that SAME OLD, SAME OLD!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on July 30, 2009 at 6:15 PM | link to this | reply

A poem we can all relate to at some point.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 30, 2009 at 4:36 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome ~.~

Great write! Well conveyed ...things mostly stay the same. Thanks so much for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on July 30, 2009 at 3:07 PM | link to this | reply

This is great! I love the idea of just another day, when it is time to play! Love you tons! sammie xoxoxo

posted by sam444 on July 30, 2009 at 2:07 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful!  This one helped me out a bit, I burn myself out sometimes trying to do everything before the day ends.  What do you know, there's another day just like it on the other side!  Lol

posted by calia14 on July 30, 2009 at 2:00 PM | link to this | reply

I love this Sinome-;Just another day'-at start and end! Feels quite sad but

I love it and it's so true!

posted by Scramble on July 30, 2009 at 1:30 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome, its interesting how we hold on to each day and to the past, as if

we could ever change either...the man and the woman, both with their secrets, "pretending" all is still well......

posted by Rumor on July 30, 2009 at 12:06 PM | link to this | reply

 I guess make the most of time. BCA, Bill*s RJJst

posted by BC-A on July 30, 2009 at 10:57 AM | link to this | reply

Somewhat pensive Sinome but elegant in expression of the routine!Another day  begins.

posted by merkie on July 30, 2009 at 9:45 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

listening to mermaids,
entangled in their braids
hearing the words he wants to hear in their serenades.
Stellar and extremely poetic and creative lines, my friend.   Again sadness resonates throughout the piece – of dreams lost or dreams not worth wishing for but you always do it with such grace and tenderness.  

posted by Troosha on July 30, 2009 at 9:08 AM | link to this | reply

The thoughts of this poem will accompany me tomorrow when I have decided to spend a day on the beach (providing the heavens don't open). Galicia does grow on you, don't you agree?

posted by vogue on July 30, 2009 at 8:07 AM | link to this | reply

take one day at a time, and live the best of it.....

posted by 9STAR on July 30, 2009 at 6:45 AM | link to this | reply