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I practically lived in the forest. Those walks usually had the hairs on my head standing straight! LOL

posted by Soul_Builder101 on July 24, 2009 at 7:12 PM | link to this | reply

I like Nature's laughter being described as rustling.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 24, 2009 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, I agree: Excellent!

You have the gift my dear...I feel it...know it...deep in my heart... 

posted by Raphael222 on July 24, 2009 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent!

posted by _teddypoet_ on July 24, 2009 at 3:04 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful imagery with such a poignant close! Hey sweetie! Love you! sammie

posted by sam444 on July 24, 2009 at 3:00 PM | link to this | reply

(Sinome - please check you email - Raphael)

posted by Raphael222 on July 24, 2009 at 1:34 PM | link to this | reply

I can almost hear the wind through the leaves....wonderful! Thanks very much for your kind comment on my post, and prayers for Ashish. Have a good weekend! Nita.

posted by snowview on July 24, 2009 at 12:23 PM | link to this | reply

That is so inviting

and really made me sit up. I've read it several times and it really is very compelling and evocative of that peculiar mood that trees and dusk and nightfall bring.

posted by malcolm on July 24, 2009 at 11:01 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderfull Sinome! If not a slightly scarey thought-(for me).Chris.

posted by Scramble on July 24, 2009 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

 I’ve seen the New Jersey Pine Barrens, camping at night, and the Poconos love. However I think that I missed the Jersey Devil. BCA, Bill’s RJJst

 

posted by BC-A on July 24, 2009 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

Thie poem is excellent from the first word

but the last two lines were unrestrained brilliance for me and took this poem from memorable to mind blowing.  Bravo!!!

posted by lionreign on July 24, 2009 at 7:41 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

sheer music but without a score or a melody….These words brought the sound of the leaves to life for me.  And there’s nothing like hearing the sound of “raw life”!  Loved the mood this piece invoked…..

posted by Troosha on July 24, 2009 at 6:45 AM | link to this | reply

I love the forest at night with a full moon overhead...thanks for taking

us there!

posted by Ariala on July 24, 2009 at 5:39 AM | link to this | reply