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One must do what they can..

posted by mariss9 on August 2, 2009 at 7:25 AM | link to this | reply

Well done!

posted by merkie on July 26, 2009 at 9:03 AM | link to this | reply

So creatively written and wise.. an excellent message.

posted by yellowrose55 on July 25, 2009 at 10:44 PM | link to this | reply

Now there's something to ponder.

posted by TAPS. on July 25, 2009 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks!  I watched The Doors right before this, so I was thinking deeply and grimly. 

posted by calia14 on July 24, 2009 at 11:52 PM | link to this | reply

It takes a lot of strenght to climb out of holes others have dug for you. What's the alternative? Well done!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on July 24, 2009 at 7:09 PM | link to this | reply

A deep ending.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 24, 2009 at 6:20 PM | link to this | reply

 Focus. BCA, Bill’s RJJst

posted by BC-A on July 24, 2009 at 8:16 AM | link to this | reply

wow Calia... Excellent work! 

posted by Sinome on July 24, 2009 at 5:51 AM | link to this | reply

This is superb!

Thought provoking and so very true! Many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on July 24, 2009 at 4:43 AM | link to this | reply

Wow, that is a poignant eye opener! KUDOS, the close is superb! sam

posted by sam444 on July 24, 2009 at 3:21 AM | link to this | reply