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Excellent shape and waterfall of romance! Kudos Marta!
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merkie
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July 15, 2009
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Sinome
Beautifully arranged waterfall of words luv.
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WileyJohn
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July 15, 2009
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Tumbling into love. Beautiful dear one.
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Kabu
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July 15, 2009
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mmmm, beautiful imagery, Sinome...and yes, very romantic....
makes me want to take a vacation up north right now....there are some very secluded little rivers and waterfalls up there that we've discovered over the years..
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Rumor
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July 15, 2009
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beautiful....
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9STAR
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July 15, 2009
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Fabulous Sinome...
...so romantic....I know of a waterfall just like you described in Switzerland. I also visited the Victoria Falls in Zimbabwe....Those are like 'tremendous' as opposed to romantic.
Lovely words Sinome. I hope you feel better now? (Than the other day?)
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Raphael222
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July 15, 2009
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You arranged it like a waterfall. Fantastic idea!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
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July 15, 2009
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A waterfall is a very special thing--wonderful for poetry. And, you have made special the waterfall by your words incorporated into a wonderful poem.
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TAPS.
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July 15, 2009
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Sinome
Merkie pointed out the shape of someone else’s poem yesterday and it sharpened my awareness that often it is an integral part of the poem. Today, the shape of your prose creates a building of emotion, then a falling into the simplicity of “you and I”. Absolutely stunning piece!
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Troosha
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July 15, 2009
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Beautiful imagery.
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texture
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July 15, 2009
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Very beautiful in style and content!
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Ariala
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July 15, 2009
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text arrangement
I like the way you arranged the text.
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shay_charles
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July 15, 2009
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