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Excellent shape and waterfall of romance! Kudos Marta!
posted by
merkie
on July 15, 2009 at 9:23 PM
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Sinome
Beautifully arranged waterfall of words luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 15, 2009 at 6:29 PM
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Tumbling into love. Beautiful dear one.
posted by
Kabu
on July 15, 2009 at 6:14 PM
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mmmm, beautiful imagery, Sinome...and yes, very romantic....
makes me want to take a vacation up north right now....there are some very secluded little rivers and waterfalls up there that we've discovered over the years..
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posted by
Rumor
on July 15, 2009 at 2:33 PM
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beautiful....
posted by
Star5_
on July 15, 2009 at 2:33 PM
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Fabulous Sinome...
...so romantic....I know of a waterfall just like you described in Switzerland. I also visited the Victoria Falls in Zimbabwe....Those are like 'tremendous' as opposed to romantic.
Lovely words Sinome. I hope you feel better now? (Than the other day?)
posted by
Raphael222
on July 15, 2009 at 12:29 PM
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You arranged it like a waterfall. Fantastic idea!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 15, 2009 at 11:37 AM
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A waterfall is a very special thing--wonderful for poetry. And, you have made special the waterfall by your words incorporated into a wonderful poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 15, 2009 at 11:30 AM
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Sinome
Merkie pointed out the shape of someone else’s poem yesterday and it sharpened my awareness that often it is an integral part of the poem. Today, the shape of your prose creates a building of emotion, then a falling into the simplicity of “you and I”. Absolutely stunning piece!
posted by
Troosha
on July 15, 2009 at 8:47 AM
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Beautiful imagery.
posted by
texture
on July 15, 2009 at 8:20 AM
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Very beautiful in style and content!
posted by
Ariala
on July 15, 2009 at 7:14 AM
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text arrangement
I like the way you arranged the text.
posted by
shay_charles
on July 15, 2009 at 7:06 AM
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