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Thank you all for the feedback...

My current thinking comes close to dear Troosha's & Chilltree's comments, and am proceeding accordingly, will be in touch again. 

 

posted by ash_pradhan on July 16, 2009 at 8:59 AM | link to this | reply

Spaceship?

 In my humble opinion, I don't think you should use the word 'spaceship'in your title.

1) It is too 'mechanical' a-sounding word and 2) It is an overused cliche....

What about: Reflections on Our Only Home - In the Vast Universe All Alone    ??????????

Peace be with you and good luck!

Jonathan

posted by Raphael222 on July 13, 2009 at 8:24 AM | link to this | reply

Looks good! I hope this does well for you offer such poignant thoughts! sam

posted by sam444 on July 13, 2009 at 5:57 AM | link to this | reply

Awesome News!!!!

Good luck my friend!!! So glad you decided to go ahead with this!

posted by Wigopa_ on July 12, 2009 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

Congratulation and best of luck with your book.

posted by shobana on July 12, 2009 at 7:59 PM | link to this | reply

I like the idea of presenting it as a story.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 12, 2009 at 2:19 PM | link to this | reply

I agree with Troosha. Trust your instincts.

posted by hardilaziz on July 12, 2009 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

Ash

How very cool that you are moving forward with a book!!!  Follow your heart as to how you want to present your poetry and that first intuition theory - it's usually right.   

posted by Troosha on July 12, 2009 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

Ash, I like it just like it is...especially the title.

posted by Chilitree on July 11, 2009 at 10:12 PM | link to this | reply

Can you believe this?...

On a Saturday night, I'm home composing my poetry book, instead of out there dancing :)! Oh well, life's moods & phases are inscrutable indeed!! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on July 11, 2009 at 9:15 PM | link to this | reply