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Not easy to keep one's balance, isn't it? I'm struggling to achieve this...Kudos!

posted by hardilaziz on July 3, 2009 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

So skillfully and elegantly written

Have I ever told you how much I admire and envy your extensive and yet precise vocabulary?  Each word is a beautifully placed gem

posted by lionreign on July 2, 2009 at 10:40 AM | link to this | reply

So much energy swirling through your words as you paint this picture....the whole write was worth reading again for me because of this one line: Rejoicing in the heart of soul and soul of heart......I will be meditating on that line the rest of the day...thank you.

posted by Krisles on July 2, 2009 at 8:41 AM | link to this | reply

Fantastic imagery, Shelly! Hope you're doing well. Nita.

posted by snowview on July 2, 2009 at 6:50 AM | link to this | reply

BCA, BillJRoost

Your poem could be about how one feels in their place within current issues love.

posted by BC-A on July 2, 2009 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent my dear Shelly!

A remarkable journey told as only you can tell it my friend; many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on July 2, 2009 at 4:59 AM | link to this | reply

Reminds me of the Storm on the Lake (Galilee) which always seems like storms of inner turmoil which start from a clear blue sky.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on July 2, 2009 at 4:48 AM | link to this | reply

Stunning poem! I will read it again and again!

posted by Chilitree on July 1, 2009 at 11:22 PM | link to this | reply

Captivating and wonderful..an adventure of the heart, painted on the sea by your hand, in your words of sweet poetry.

posted by yellowrose55 on July 1, 2009 at 9:05 PM | link to this | reply

A great voyage that is Sam, so wonderfully constructed. Loved it. thank you so much for your kind comment in my blog.

posted by shobana on July 1, 2009 at 7:32 PM | link to this | reply

Such a journey you take me on!  Wonderful writing!

posted by calia14 on July 1, 2009 at 7:03 PM | link to this | reply

 I sincerely enjoyed each word and thought in your poem.

posted by BrightIrish on July 1, 2009 at 4:14 PM | link to this | reply

Bravo!

Shelly nice vision and I know you know the circumstances around isn't important for the Love within is moving as this story. Lv Femia

posted by fememefeme on July 1, 2009 at 4:00 PM | link to this | reply

I love this poem...I feel like you wrote it for me....

posted by Dawnofanewday on July 1, 2009 at 3:06 PM | link to this | reply

Rejoicing in the heart of the soul and soul of heart...........wonderful images carved in a storm!

posted by shamasehar on July 1, 2009 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

Wow Shelly . Bravo your images project a vision of struugles calm in growth! Bravo

posted by merkie on July 1, 2009 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

exxcellent, my friend. xoxoxo

posted by hazel_st_cricket on July 1, 2009 at 10:22 AM | link to this | reply