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just checked back into blogit to do a few reads--was looking for an elevator and wasn't expecting a minor explosion...Defiance--is there anthing else you write about? That's what makes you unique--that you have this smoledering theme, and everytime you write in a moment, there is always something else "over the top" to relate to.

Ok, so you wake me up--but that's the only reason I like reading you.

In this one, I especially liked "pampered hatred/hardened tears". You say a lot in a few words. But when I got to the umbrella, did you mean negation, or negotiation?

posted by jfm32 on October 7, 2009 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

Ahh ... Most touching and poignant, Purple ....

posted by abanerjee on September 8, 2009 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

BC-A, Bill’s RJJst

posted by BC-A on August 25, 2009 at 1:05 PM | link to this | reply

Hoping you are doing better, Mermaid. Deep feelings in these words you have written.

posted by adnohr on August 7, 2009 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

quite right there...

posted by bythewindowsill on August 6, 2009 at 12:18 AM | link to this | reply

Such striking and poignant imagery...I hope she makes her way out.

posted by mariss9 on July 10, 2009 at 10:49 AM | link to this | reply

Came by again to read this poem!

posted by Straightforward on July 10, 2009 at 10:09 AM | link to this | reply

hey .......

posted by 9STAR on July 10, 2009 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent! ... very well expressed!

posted by Chilitree on July 9, 2009 at 12:03 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and very powerful thanks for sharing.

posted by chuck_ibrahim on July 8, 2009 at 9:50 PM | link to this | reply

Profound and powerful .....

posted by afzal50 on July 7, 2009 at 5:32 PM | link to this | reply

Powerful fight you have going to regain the wellbeing of you~ our special Mermaid! This is excellent expression of your emotions! Hugs!

posted by merkie on July 4, 2009 at 8:49 AM | link to this | reply

I have no doubt that you are a strong woman and that you will prevail upon these test G-d has sent you.  Hang in there my friend.  You are going to be OK  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on July 2, 2009 at 4:59 AM | link to this | reply

Nice to see you again Jen!

I hope you are doing well; I do believe our trials make us stronger and teach us the lessons of life at the very least; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on July 2, 2009 at 3:39 AM | link to this | reply

I suppose it's true what they say, whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger

posted by calia14 on July 1, 2009 at 7:23 PM | link to this | reply

It's interesting how adversity can bring strength

posted by Straightforward on July 1, 2009 at 9:33 AM | link to this | reply