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I have a feeling that from now on when it thunders,
I will think of some of the things you wrote in this poem.

posted by TAPS. on July 2, 2009 at 2:48 PM | link to this | reply

BCA, BillJRoost

You create a natural process of coping with grief love.

 

posted by BC-A on July 2, 2009 at 6:44 AM | link to this | reply

great write and reflective.  Great memories enveloped in sadness.  I always think that that is a pity.

posted by spiderfly on July 2, 2009 at 12:23 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely Sinome. A thunderous applause to you!

posted by shobana on July 1, 2009 at 9:12 PM | link to this | reply

The rain not only cleanses this earth, I've been there too when it cleansed my soul. I feel the "thunderous intensity of your poem Sinome and the letting go.

posted by yellowrose55 on July 1, 2009 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

Powerful work!  I was enthralled, I think everyone gets taken hostage by their own terrible memories now and again, you so wonderfully expressed the roller coaster that this takes us on!

posted by calia14 on July 1, 2009 at 7:34 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely Sinome...

Powerful, poignant.....

Thank you.  

posted by Raphael222 on July 1, 2009 at 5:56 PM | link to this | reply

vivid and thought provoking as always, Sinome...:)

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posted by Rumor on July 1, 2009 at 11:58 AM | link to this | reply

Living the sigh Excellent thundering communication to your audience leaving a restless peace! Well said Sinome

posted by merkie on July 1, 2009 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply

Once again you grab the reader by the heart and throat

and take us through the emotional mill with you - excellently done

posted by lionreign on July 1, 2009 at 8:38 AM | link to this | reply

Powerful imagery and beautifully expressed thoughts. Love your poems!

posted by snowview on July 1, 2009 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful imagery and I share in your sigh! sammie Love how the rainbow was presented, a sure sign of new hope!

posted by sam444 on July 1, 2009 at 7:12 AM | link to this | reply

"Cold tears

in warm afternoons" - simply beautiful

posted by malcolm on July 1, 2009 at 6:16 AM | link to this | reply

Remarkable my dear Sinome

I believe storms are necessary in order to cleanse and prepare for the coming rainbow! Beautifully done; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on July 1, 2009 at 4:24 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, darling, there is always a rainbow at the end of any storm and where else to view it better than in my beloved Miami. The sand is still on my toes and will stay there until I'm back to step on South Beach.

posted by vogue on June 30, 2009 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

storm clouds are all around

posted by lustorlove on June 30, 2009 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply

booooooohooo don't worry, it gets better...

posted by 9STAR on June 30, 2009 at 6:27 PM | link to this | reply

Thunders was an approrpiate word to use.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 30, 2009 at 5:44 PM | link to this | reply