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Wonderful!  It reminds me that I need to go to the Jackson County Fair in Sedalia in August.  I haven't been since my long-time friend was killed in a car accident on I-70 on the way home from the Fair.  But, it's time for me to put that past me and go once more.

posted by TAPS. on July 1, 2009 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply

for all it's complexity

the rhyme scheme is very easy to read and puts a great tone to the poem

posted by lionreign on July 1, 2009 at 8:55 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely and accessible to lots of us I think

posted by malcolm on July 1, 2009 at 6:13 AM | link to this | reply

Oh yes Shelly

seemingly flippant but not so on a second read my friend; clever wording with excellent results! Many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on July 1, 2009 at 3:04 AM | link to this | reply

I'm not sure I understand the rythm part of aabbaacc etc but I like it nonethe less!

posted by auslander on July 1, 2009 at 1:04 AM | link to this | reply

great poem

I love it....

posted by Terrie_Schmidt on June 30, 2009 at 10:04 PM | link to this | reply

Your poem is adorable. Nurturing beauty for that blue ribbon aroma. You do love flowers, this I know.

posted by yellowrose55 on June 30, 2009 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply

May your creations bloom forever!

posted by hardilaziz on June 30, 2009 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply

I like your new style of poetry

posted by lustorlove on June 30, 2009 at 8:48 PM | link to this | reply

Sam, turned out perfect! A beautiful poem.

posted by shobana on June 30, 2009 at 8:43 PM | link to this | reply

  Very Nice Poem!  

posted by BrightIrish on June 30, 2009 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

Nice Shelly!

I was a little scared at first, too, I like how you turned it around to a hopeful, lighthearted poem from the direction that it seemed to be taking!

posted by calia14 on June 30, 2009 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply

Great! You are so talented, Sam.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on June 30, 2009 at 12:25 PM | link to this | reply

That title scared me at first lady... but the poem was so nice I truly enjoyed the read.  You are right ,  the cadence was great!  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on June 30, 2009 at 11:17 AM | link to this | reply

Love it !! It goes along with what has been keeping you busy lately. xoxoo

  

posted by hazel_st_cricket on June 30, 2009 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

That is the best kind of interment I know. Charming poem Shelly!  

posted by elinjo on June 30, 2009 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply