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Sinome

Beautifully worded....and so true.  Personally, I hate to just lie there in the sun....I can handle maybe 20 minutes.....maybe for the exact reasons you examine....

posted by Krisles on June 30, 2009 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply

Count me in as another one who likes the imagery.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 30, 2009 at 5:45 PM | link to this | reply

 Your imagery feels beautiful and relaxing. BCA, BillJRoost

 

 

posted by BC-A on June 30, 2009 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

Your talent becomes more aparent with every verse,

with each line, your gift is phenomenal and this poem an example of it's awesome scope.  Brilliantly written.

posted by lionreign on June 30, 2009 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

An important message and such vivid imagery my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on June 30, 2009 at 4:35 AM | link to this | reply

What a beautiful, vivid picture, and full of insights. Nita.

posted by snowview on June 30, 2009 at 3:07 AM | link to this | reply

Sad to miss the beauty and shut out the music of the day. Missing out !Well said!

posted by merkie on June 29, 2009 at 10:47 PM | link to this | reply