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Beautifully captured sam - an all too familiar story .. 

"Then forever seemed so far away
and now forever belongs to another day!
I will never give my heart again
for each time my emotions end in ruin." 

posted by mneme on June 27, 2009 at 11:05 PM | link to this | reply

I really enjoy this poem

I find it hard to relate to certain poetry, but yours just jumps out and makes one feel in the midst of your feelings. I enjoy your writing. I'll be reading more. Thank You! 

posted by gypsylove on June 27, 2009 at 10:43 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly

I think you may have ended up on the Moon's dark side - come on over to the sunny one...

posted by Nautikos on June 27, 2009 at 2:43 PM | link to this | reply

So Sad, though true. But there's always hope for Mr. or Miss. right.

Nice Poem!

God Bless!

posted by dougspoetry on June 27, 2009 at 2:24 PM | link to this | reply

Just excellent Shelly...

So deep and powerful......Blessings

Jonathan

posted by Raphael222 on June 27, 2009 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply

Though your poem is about being a "Moonsitter", it reminded me of this from 1979's "Moonraker".  I always liked watching it, and listening.

 

posted by TAPS. on June 27, 2009 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply

My Sam I am yes I have missed you sweetie and now I know why

you're up there on that lonely moon. Come on down, I have hugs going to waste.

posted by Kabu on June 27, 2009 at 12:31 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Sam. I like this idea of sitting on the moon...

posted by Rockingrector_retd on June 27, 2009 at 12:26 PM | link to this | reply

Sam

Ahh, the lure of the moon (sometimes misleading but a wonderful lure nonetheless).  

posted by Troosha on June 27, 2009 at 9:37 AM | link to this | reply

 So illuminating and beautiful...Heart break has sent me to that moon many times.

posted by yellowrose55 on June 27, 2009 at 7:48 AM | link to this | reply

The night does have a character of its own; beautiful! Thanks Shelly! Thanks for your generous comment on my post. Nita.

posted by snowview on June 27, 2009 at 7:45 AM | link to this | reply

I love this: hasty lovers become strangers by daylight. Truth bluntly told as only you can!

posted by hardilaziz on June 27, 2009 at 6:59 AM | link to this | reply

very nice

so true about how lovers become strangers by day

posted by MiaElla on June 27, 2009 at 6:35 AM | link to this | reply

I've been there...I know how that feels...but I also believe when it's

meant to be, love never ends. May you love again

posted by Ariala on June 27, 2009 at 4:43 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks for the invitation! Original way of talking about broken hearts. 

posted by elinjo on June 27, 2009 at 4:27 AM | link to this | reply

Well put, the illusion of love is often the fault of the moons enchantments... thanks for the welcoming btw.

posted by murphys_law_breaker8 on June 27, 2009 at 1:03 AM | link to this | reply