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Can understand what you are saying here....
posted by
Straightforward
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September 13, 2009
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Apt Title.
Mystereo, this was a good job. I mean the title alone just suites the content of the compositon, plus I love the fact that you were able to capture the fantasies of the persona in the poem in a way that is realistic but ironical; because the average person will pursue, and probably get into a mess! You know what I mean...However, I see a little bit of lust here, What about that uuh. Nevertheless, I appreciate the romantic tone of the piece. Good job!
posted by
intellectual_acumen
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July 17, 2009
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wow.....
posted by
9STAR
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July 10, 2009
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WOW!
That was brilliant, plus all the other superlatives that were mentioned.
posted by
Sudanym_
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July 2, 2009
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Awesome, love in the Summer!
posted by
mariss9
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June 28, 2009
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Just so wow!! mystereo.
posted by
shobana
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June 25, 2009
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What a fantastic poem! I was captivated! It is melancholy but so nicely conceived and written! sam
posted by
sam444
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June 24, 2009
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Would break your heart to lose the rapport with the one you adore>Superb!
posted by
merkie
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June 24, 2009
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A paranoid rapport... wonderful!
posted by
hardilaziz
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June 24, 2009
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10:34 AM
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wow!
posted by
9STAR
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June 23, 2009
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A very nice poem about love
Thanks for sharing.
posted by
chuck_ibrahim
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June 23, 2009
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