Comments on The thought of your goodbye

Go to Martas poems - Add a comment - Go to The thought of your goodbye

What's up? I haven't seen you lately, sweetie! Love you! sammie xoxoxoxo

posted by sam444 on June 22, 2009 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

A beautiful melancholic poem Sinome.

posted by shobana on June 22, 2009 at 7:35 PM | link to this | reply

wow, this is a beautiful piece

I love the frantic, frenetic aspects of the storm fading to the sad grey at the end, your melancholy is so beautifully expressed, my dear

posted by lionreign on June 22, 2009 at 7:48 AM | link to this | reply

I'm always amazed at the depth and power of your thoughts and use of words to convey them--excellent. Thanks for your kind comment on my post; I am grateful for your concern and support. My son Ashish is back to work in Bangalore; I worry about him, and depend on all your prayers for the new medicines to work. Love and blessings. Nita.

posted by snowview on June 22, 2009 at 5:17 AM | link to this | reply

I hear the strength is this

posted by lustorlove on June 21, 2009 at 9:22 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent portrayal of a difficult thought! Love you, too!!! xoxoxoxox sammie

posted by sam444 on June 21, 2009 at 7:27 PM | link to this | reply

Always excellent verse!

posted by merkie on June 21, 2009 at 7:27 PM | link to this | reply

That would so painful.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 21, 2009 at 2:03 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Powerful! And one would hope for a fond return...

posted by Nautikos on June 21, 2009 at 5:22 AM | link to this | reply

Gripping and so sad...beautifully written

posted by Ariala on June 21, 2009 at 4:05 AM | link to this | reply

Very touching poem.

posted by elinjo on June 21, 2009 at 2:23 AM | link to this | reply