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Re: rockingrector

Thanks!

posted by lionreign on June 22, 2009 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444

Thank you - I will have a think about the suggestions and make a choice

posted by lionreign on June 22, 2009 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

Re: hardilaziz

thank you!!!

posted by lionreign on June 22, 2009 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Gorgeous and very, very vivid!

Thanks Malcolm!

posted by lionreign on June 22, 2009 at 7:52 AM | link to this | reply

Re: speechless, u are a great poet, no doubt!!!!!! you Rock!!!!

Thank you Sue!

posted by lionreign on June 22, 2009 at 7:51 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Merkie

Thank you so much - and of course you can, I am flattered that you would want to .

posted by lionreign on June 22, 2009 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

  Thank you so very much, I got very warm ears reading this comment (ok and a huge grin) and I am delighted that you think so highly of my work.

 

posted by lionreign on June 22, 2009 at 7:45 AM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

Thanks, but some paths just go together for a while/

posted by lionreign on June 22, 2009 at 7:40 AM | link to this | reply

The muse of the night sky?

posted by Rockingrector_retd on June 20, 2009 at 1:58 AM | link to this | reply

My thought for a title: a moment of gentle brilliance; It's what the poem means for me all the way through! sam

posted by sam444 on June 19, 2009 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

Spectacular stuff!

posted by hardilaziz on June 19, 2009 at 11:27 AM | link to this | reply

Gorgeous and very, very vivid!

posted by malcolm on June 19, 2009 at 11:18 AM | link to this | reply

speechless, u are a great poet, no doubt!!!!!! you Rock!!!!

posted by 9STAR on June 19, 2009 at 9:34 AM | link to this | reply

Brilliant Lion . I agree with sinome. Yours to title and may I copy this ?

posted by merkie on June 19, 2009 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

Lion,  sometimes when i read your poems I feel so humbled... so aware that I am in the presence of genius... your images are so vivid.   " She walked a ballet, her unconscious elegance caressed the evening silence that other women bruised..."   immediately one imagines grace... softness... and the beautiful difference between her and the ordinary... or: "Where the tear filled gutters flowed and buildings slumped for want of care."  we right away are placed on a dilapidated neighborhood... filled with suffering disadvantaged people... one feels the pain and the sorrow , the compasion in your words... Oh they are soooo amazing, so powerful  those words that  I got to be careful now, when I write,  not to plagiarize you :-)  because what you write becomes part of my soul...  I am so impressed with this one... What to call it???... "The muse" comes to mind since she inspired such beauty... but I think something like "The beautiful path of  innocence " also would go... I guess its your baby to name :-)  whatever you call it... its a gem :-)

posted by Sinome on June 19, 2009 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

BCA, BillJRoost Aah to see, relate, and ask the person out but you might stand on different paths.

posted by BC-A on June 19, 2009 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply