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A lot of emotions there.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 20, 2009 at 5:30 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and whistful

The soft and elegant yearning of this poem is phenomenally well presented - this poem is so effective I had to read it twice just because I enjoyed it so much

posted by lionreign on June 19, 2009 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful expressions and use of words, "as gentle as the night wind and as quick as a moonbow"---your poems are truly exquisite. Nita.

posted by snowview on June 19, 2009 at 6:26 AM | link to this | reply

Such bitter sweet imagery Sinome!

Beautifully written indeed; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on June 19, 2009 at 3:44 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written!

posted by Chilitree on June 19, 2009 at 3:25 AM | link to this | reply

Brava! Brava!

you are my thunder and now your shadow touches me... dear one, blessed penny poet!... you've moved the depth of my being again... how we all miss the love that is so close... and simply wants to be with us... thank youxoxoxo 

posted by MasonGarrett on June 19, 2009 at 12:07 AM | link to this | reply

Wow! so very creative - enchanting write. Bravo- your imagination sparkles and entrances the readerleaving us in your shadow.

posted by merkie on June 18, 2009 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

Wow! A shadow, indeed! What visual imagery and the elusiveness of it as well! Splendid! sammie loves you, too!

posted by sam444 on June 18, 2009 at 9:31 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and haunting, such a masterpiece! 

posted by calia14 on June 18, 2009 at 9:18 PM | link to this | reply

Such love. wonderful right.

posted by texture on June 18, 2009 at 9:00 PM | link to this | reply