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BCA, BillJRoost The lines hit me realistically awesome love.

posted by BC-A on June 19, 2009 at 8:55 AM | link to this | reply

I'm enjoying the way the narrative is unfolding.. piece by piece

posted by mneme on June 18, 2009 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

You have created characters i would be willing to be. :)

posted by texture on June 18, 2009 at 4:51 AM | link to this | reply

Intimate peeks...well done!

posted by Ariala on June 18, 2009 at 4:48 AM | link to this | reply

This is good stuff, Azur...

It begs mimicry.

posted by Pat_B on June 18, 2009 at 3:36 AM | link to this | reply

Uh oh, someone's not happy...or is it that "smile". Your writing is stirring and fun in the same breath. Love it.

posted by yellowrose55 on June 17, 2009 at 11:37 PM | link to this | reply

Right on! These just make my day! I have been thinking of you every time I move a box of books or unload one! I don't think I had thirty but they won't stop! I still store all my kids books and they have at least two!These are from their childhood! I told them they could not have their stuff until they got their first permanent home! I did this because I remembered how much I lost being careless in my 20's! I am off to the marquee to fix a bulb! Stage left, I believe, care for a drink on the veranda? lol sam

posted by sam444 on June 17, 2009 at 11:20 PM | link to this | reply

Azur

It is unique this unsaid letters that you write. Leaves a lot to imagination.

posted by shobana on June 17, 2009 at 10:13 PM | link to this | reply