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Nice

You see, what made this poem so interesting was the manner in which you started it; more like an exhortation, and then it progressed into a lamentation over a loved one who has passed away. Indeed...We Should Never Take for Granted, Even a Second We are Allowed By Our Maker to Live. And you know my favorite line..."feed the flesh...and the soul, God's word"(paraphrased). Kudos!

posted by intellectual_acumen on July 17, 2009 at 3:02 AM | link to this | reply

Mystereo

Thank you..

posted by shobana on June 14, 2009 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful!!!!!!

posted by 9STAR on June 12, 2009 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

Mystereo

Thank you for your lovely comments to my poetry. Have a nice weekend.

posted by shobana on June 11, 2009 at 11:21 PM | link to this | reply

Sound advice here.

posted by hardilaziz on June 11, 2009 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

Very moving poem

posted by Sudanym_ on June 11, 2009 at 8:13 AM | link to this | reply

Mystereo

We do tend to forget that we don’t have forever and sometimes it takes the loss of a loved one to remind us that each day is precious.

posted by Troosha on June 11, 2009 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

Mystereo

You're right there. Never take for granted life. Great poem.

posted by shobana on June 11, 2009 at 1:23 AM | link to this | reply

yes, it's so true.....

posted by 9STAR on June 10, 2009 at 7:44 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful imagery on not taking things for granted! Each moment is to be savored! So happy to see you post, too! sam

posted by sam444 on June 10, 2009 at 2:04 PM | link to this | reply

Nothing should be taken for granted in this life. Very nice poem thanks for sharing.

posted by chuck_ibrahim on June 10, 2009 at 12:36 PM | link to this | reply

Good!  I try to take nothing for granted--especially life.
Here today/gone tomorrow is a sad epitaph for loved ones and friends,
and one day for myself.

posted by TAPS. on June 10, 2009 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply