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Covering all the senses.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 11, 2009 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

You really know how to paint a picture with your words.  

posted by TAPS. on June 11, 2009 at 12:38 PM | link to this | reply

 I saw Nights in Rodente yesterday in which Richard Gere pulls Diane Lane away from a falling cabinet during a storm. Today I really enjoy the sounds of the night that both cool and chill in your poem. BCA, BillJRoost

 

posted by BC-A on June 11, 2009 at 10:28 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

You described the bed and the shower so beautifully I felt my eyes closing. But, if I went to bed it won't be humid because it's chilly here, so much so that I put the furnace on in the mornings. Where is Al Gore's Global warming I wonder?

posted by WileyJohn on June 10, 2009 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

An awesome poem. Yes change does come from within first. Loved it.

posted by shobana on June 10, 2009 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful picture of a storm, Sinome, along with the underlying message

that makes this one a treat.......

posted by Rumor on June 10, 2009 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Speechless…………

posted by Troosha on June 10, 2009 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply

So skillfully crafted is this contemplation of life, both ordinary and extraordinary in its scope.  Well done!

posted by calia14 on June 10, 2009 at 8:22 AM | link to this | reply

The TV does drag us back to the grimmer side of reality doesn't it?

but there is always more to see, more to do and more to learn

posted by lionreign on June 10, 2009 at 7:47 AM | link to this | reply

There always seems to be more to seek and more to find! Outstanding imagery, too! sammie

posted by sam444 on June 10, 2009 at 5:54 AM | link to this | reply

this is different, and its that hot

posted by lustorlove on June 9, 2009 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

Your words so wonderfully paint an intimate picture..thundering luminous nature intertwined with such sad contemplation.

posted by yellowrose55 on June 9, 2009 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

Listen to the inner voice- that's what I want to do after reading your poem!

posted by hardilaziz on June 9, 2009 at 8:46 PM | link to this | reply

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posted by Azur on June 9, 2009 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

Very mood Sinome

posted by Azur on June 9, 2009 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply