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Re: texture
I think I needed to hear this. Gonna try to wing it and tell the inner critic to shut up. :)  Thank you. Kabu is a very lucky woman. :)

posted by texture on June 17, 2009 at 1:43 PM | link to this | reply

texture

I think you ought to loosen up a bit. I enjoyed your last post very much. I enjoy this one too, very expressive and I think it good that one can have the ability to arouse others. Isn't that what being a good writer is? To be able to manipulate emotions? I don't know. I'm not a great writer but I know from being an avid reader, that it's those books and stories that arouse my emotions are those I enjoy most.

You are a good writer and I loved this poem, who hasn't had that problem of getting to sleep because they are overcome with mental passion? I know I've sure been dreaming in the past month luv.

posted by WileyJohn on June 14, 2009 at 2:51 PM | link to this | reply