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We are...as they say, our own worst critic!
posted by
NiteTide
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June 11, 2009
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hard to say why some barbs stick longer than others in the conscience..
posted by
mariss9
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June 9, 2009
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A nice read there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
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June 9, 2009
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Quit dwelling on the past will ya :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
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June 9, 2009
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very nice
posted by
lustorlove
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June 8, 2009
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Calia
Beautifully said.
posted by
shobana
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June 8, 2009
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I really liked but
my conscience is not so easily charmed! I can appreciate this imagery for I find a little of myself in it! sam
posted by
sam444
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June 8, 2009
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Re: hardilaziz
Thanks!
posted by
calia14
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June 8, 2009
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Re: texture
I like the way you think!
posted by
calia14
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June 8, 2009
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Re: rockingrector
Well said, my friend!
posted by
calia14
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June 8, 2009
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Re: Sinome
The blogit family here shows a lot of concern, I mostly wanted to mitigate worry that there was something wrong. Re-reading, I can see how it does come off as defensive. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though :)
posted by
calia14
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June 8, 2009
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Re: nice poem but...
Yeah! Thanks, lol.
posted by
calia14
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June 8, 2009
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Yeay, for saying it out loud. Sometimes we just write, out of no where for no apparent reason. Could be a past life or a future vision. :) :) Great poem too. :)
posted by
texture
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June 8, 2009
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Yes, isn't it difficult to
feel forgiven even when you know in your mind that you are!
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
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June 8, 2009
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nice poem but...
Ok, the fine print at the end DOES NOT! absolve you. i just spoke with God and he says yo'u're not gonna make the cut off--you know you're guilty. It's a joke Ladies and Gentlemen. Did you mean to say conscience in the last line or is that just me?
posted by
Sudanym_
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June 8, 2009
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I'm sure you'll overcome this worry soon.
posted by
hardilaziz
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June 7, 2009
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Wow Calia... you are quite defensive about this poem...:-) and truly it is a great one. I loved it and as an aspiring poet myself, I know that many times one uses empathetic feelings to get the inspiration for a poem so I doubt anyone is going to make any assumptions here... The poem itself is very good ... honest and raw... Excellent work my friend :-)
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Sinome
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June 7, 2009
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