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Your poems have been so heartbreaking lately.  More so than usual it seems.  Is your heart lost in bittersweet memories? 

posted by NiteTide on June 8, 2009 at 6:10 PM | link to this | reply

The world moves on.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 7, 2009 at 4:27 PM | link to this | reply

i held my breath until you were done. Absolutely......

posted by texture on June 7, 2009 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written and very graceful.

posted by Chilitree on June 7, 2009 at 1:24 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Beautiful, and you won't have to play that letting go sadnes for another 50 years luv. This kind of writing must go on, and on

posted by WileyJohn on June 7, 2009 at 9:45 AM | link to this | reply

You write the most beautiful poems

I can get lost in them forever.

posted by skye08 on June 7, 2009 at 8:21 AM | link to this | reply

I thought the imagery was stupendous! I read it aloud because it felt most natural that way! You certainly covered the gamut in this poem! [I have not received my rugs yet, it was only a partial delivery of my order. Perhaps this week!] Love you: MOSTEST!!!! xoxoxoxoxo

posted by sam444 on June 7, 2009 at 7:27 AM | link to this | reply

I really like this and I kept my promise, a little late but better late then never

posted by lustorlove on June 7, 2009 at 12:43 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful and unique-it's something we all think about, but you had the guts to write about it-and you pulled it off wonderfully

posted by calia14 on June 6, 2009 at 10:08 PM | link to this | reply

That was a hauntingly beautiful masterpiece.

It touched me deeply.

posted by muley12 on June 6, 2009 at 7:17 PM | link to this | reply

when my time to go, I will think of nbomt voice, so I can take to heaven

with me..........

Nice one....

posted by 9STAR on June 6, 2009 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply