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Re: NiteTide

nope - I could be anything in human form... I'm not even sure what it is to be human, glad you liked this one though, it's a bit of good fun

posted by lionreign on June 10, 2009 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

This line: The cheeky morning
Laps softly at my smile, <-- is a phrase I enjoyed like no other.  I haven't liked a line this much in a LONG time.  You always have such a way with words, it's amazing.  Are you sure you're human?

posted by NiteTide on June 8, 2009 at 6:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Something about others that make the heart spring in a form or school

Thank you

posted by lionreign on June 5, 2009 at 3:40 AM | link to this | reply

Something about others that make the heart spring in a form or school

boy or girl, some kind silly passion. Deep.

posted by Mystereo on June 4, 2009 at 3:49 PM | link to this | reply

Re: This is such a beauty my dear Lion

Thank you, dear one

posted by lionreign on June 4, 2009 at 8:54 AM | link to this | reply

Re: A beautiful way to start the day

that sounds heavenly

posted by lionreign on June 4, 2009 at 8:53 AM | link to this | reply

Re: rockingrector

Thanks - it really does make the day more lively if you start it right

posted by lionreign on June 4, 2009 at 8:42 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Yellowrose55

Thank you - glad you had fun with it

posted by lionreign on June 4, 2009 at 8:40 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444

Thanks sam - I was feeling very cheerful when I wrote this and pictured a morning of bright smiles and mischief

posted by lionreign on June 4, 2009 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Beautiful!

Thank you, dear friend

posted by lionreign on June 4, 2009 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

Re: chuck_ibrahim

Thank you!

posted by lionreign on June 4, 2009 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Merkie

Thank you!

posted by lionreign on June 4, 2009 at 8:21 AM | link to this | reply

This is such a beauty my dear Lion

Sunny and bright and wonderful start to the day! Many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on June 4, 2009 at 3:52 AM | link to this | reply

A beautiful way to start the day

Familiar feelings of a soft warm sweater one can slip into and remember dreamy times.

posted by skye08 on June 4, 2009 at 3:27 AM | link to this | reply

This is bright and happy - perfect way to start a new day.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on June 4, 2009 at 1:20 AM | link to this | reply

Joy brings out beauty like your poem makes me wanna dance. Nice one...

posted by yellowrose55 on June 3, 2009 at 11:08 PM | link to this | reply

I adored a 'cheeky morning'; I liked to think of it as a bit sassy in a bold way! Love the second half of the poem for it accentuated the first half! sam

posted by sam444 on June 3, 2009 at 9:14 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful!

posted by 9STAR on June 3, 2009 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful imagery Thanks for sharing.

posted by chuck_ibrahim on June 3, 2009 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

Bright cheery cheeky verse greets a day so gleefully! Excellent Lion!

posted by merkie on June 3, 2009 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply