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Nice one..you put me there, by the sea where I love to be.

posted by yellowrose55 on August 8, 2009 at 10:19 AM | link to this | reply

I love this...and can really feel it.  Plus I am currently reading a book which takes place mostly by the ocean!

posted by RASSE on June 24, 2009 at 1:25 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice, I can smell the salt from here...

posted by calia14 on June 18, 2009 at 9:35 PM | link to this | reply

Too occasional

say I

posted by Azur on June 14, 2009 at 7:00 PM | link to this | reply

Naut, lovely. I love how you overlapped the words.

I always told you that you have the heart of a poet . You also are very much a romantic. It is time, in my humble opinion, that you combine the two. muser

posted by muser on June 8, 2009 at 7:13 AM | link to this | reply

uh!!!  I just thought of this  loll... I should have commented with it :-)  Got to show you :-)

Excellentmyfriend

youareverytalented

Iloveallyourstuff

 ( sorry  about that, could not help it,  loll)  be well

posted by Sinome on June 7, 2009 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent and unique... Love it

posted by Sinome on June 7, 2009 at 8:18 PM | link to this | reply

  WOW ~ Really Nice!!

posted by BrightIrish on June 5, 2009 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply

NAUTIKOS

I love this!  I also write in this form.....quite a bit, actually....in some private emails and maybe in a blog or two here....I call it "rapping" becausethat'sexactlywhatitfeelslikeandonceyougetintoityoucanactuallygetarhythmgoing....

posted by Krisles on June 4, 2009 at 2:50 PM | link to this | reply

yesandit'scallingtome

Wow!  It's hard to leave out the spaces.  They just automatically want to place themselves between words.

posted by TAPS. on May 31, 2009 at 8:01 PM | link to this | reply

I wish I would have thought of Azur's comment presentation! I love it, too! It is a little e e cummings' feel for me! KUDOS!!!! Shelly

posted by sam444 on May 31, 2009 at 6:15 PM | link to this | reply

Naut

Ilovethisandhowthe

wordsruntogether

posted by Azur on May 31, 2009 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

~the ocean calls

posted by OTA. on May 31, 2009 at 4:55 PM | link to this | reply

Naut’s mind is a remarkable thing….

posted by Troosha on May 31, 2009 at 8:11 AM | link to this | reply

Troosh

Thanks. And yes, the blending of the words was intentional...

posted by Nautikos on May 31, 2009 at 8:03 AM | link to this | reply

Naut

Did you mean for each word to blend together?  Just curious.  Given I live out here by the ocean this created a crisp and visible image for me….

posted by Troosha on May 31, 2009 at 7:26 AM | link to this | reply