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The joy....the pain...it's amazing how much the earth doesn't change when we / our hearts have changed so significantly. We think the world will change with our hearts...and yet we see that it is only us...and even if it comes to an end...the earth remains constant...and in a way it helps us to recover from the pain of changing.
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NiteTide
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Marta, I can't add anything that will better describe....
your poem than what has been written. So, I'll just say 2
!
posted by
Texas_Gem
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May 28, 2009
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Love can certainly brighten a day.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
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May 28, 2009
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Sinome
I read this earlier but return to comment now. It is lovely. The luminance of love
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Azur
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May 28, 2009
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wow
such tender insight - this is so true and so beautifully expressed. I would tell you which bit is my favourite but I'd have to post the whole poem
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lionreign
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May 28, 2009
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I like not if but when it comes
posted by
lustorlove
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May 28, 2009
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I have really missed your beautiful poems
The world is a more rosy place.
posted by
skye08
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May 28, 2009
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Perfect description Sinome............
this is exactly how it is! You have captured this feeling beautifully; very well done; many blessings and thanks
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mariaki
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May 28, 2009
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Beautiful and so true...you have an amazing insight into the human mind and emotions. Thanks for commenting on my post. Nita.
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snowview
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May 28, 2009
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Oooops! Look what I did to your name.
posted by
TAPS.
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May 28, 2009
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Wonderful, Simone. I remember how it was--all these years since first love came to me in 1957. One doesn't forget something like that--not the littlest detail.
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TAPS.
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May 28, 2009
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Ps . my new book is out go to amazon.com and put in osiris halisi I sent it
out to you today! check out cover! poetry!
posted by
lestate7
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May 28, 2009
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Awesome,awesome! love you!
posted by
lestate7
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May 28, 2009
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When you fall in love, the stars will dance, the rain will tickle your
heart, Sun will flash in mind even when it's dark.....mind will get ready for another kiss.......and don't you, won't you agree......
always Sue
posted by
9STAR
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May 27, 2009
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Sinome
Beautiful, "When you fall in love,
not if but when ...
nothing will really change, ....."
and I love that not if but when, and the rest of that poem is as gentle as the rain....
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WileyJohn
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May 27, 2009
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