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Sometimes...silence is more of what we need than words.  Sometimes the silence will heal more than anything else.  This is simply beautiful Marta - and it made my heart cry as much as it hoped.

posted by NiteTide on June 8, 2009 at 5:38 PM | link to this | reply

This entry makes me remember back to when. . ,

I was comforting this woman whose husband of a very long time had just up and left her.  I remember telling her that everything would be better. ., that she would learn to love again.  At the same time, my heart was breaking for her time.  Nice poem.

posted by Joe_Love on May 26, 2009 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

Superb! Such perfect word-imagery, from the abyss to the skies, and so my Marta princess- like xoxoxo

posted by Bhaskar.ing on May 25, 2009 at 10:43 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Yes, when she gets home luv;"Yes, my heart knows one day there will be no more pain......"

posted by WileyJohn on May 25, 2009 at 8:50 PM | link to this | reply

Your words are touching, healing and always beautiful.

posted by yellowrose55 on May 25, 2009 at 8:49 PM | link to this | reply

this makes me think of my friend who lost his wife

posted by lustorlove on May 25, 2009 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful

for me this captured the helplessness I feel to watch another's heart break, the feeling that all the truths are so inadequate in the face of their pain along with the compassion and comfort offered by just being there for them.  I think this is just brilliant

posted by lionreign on May 25, 2009 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written Sinome

inspiring comfort and hope; excellent poem; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on May 25, 2009 at 5:08 AM | link to this | reply

This is so comforting and encouraging; thanks! Thanks too for your very kind comments on my post. Nita.

posted by snowview on May 25, 2009 at 2:31 AM | link to this | reply

Heartfelt. Thank you.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on May 25, 2009 at 1:13 AM | link to this | reply

Haunting...well done indeed!

posted by _teddypoet_ on May 24, 2009 at 10:58 PM | link to this | reply

Compassion at work! Kudos.

posted by hardilaziz on May 24, 2009 at 7:06 PM | link to this | reply

u are a true friend......

posted by 9STAR on May 24, 2009 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

I think this is one of the most difficult things to do too! It just breaks while it keeps beat! Kind of an eerie essence to it with the close of heart beating! KUDOS!!! sammie [loves you] xoxoxoxo

posted by sam444 on May 24, 2009 at 5:00 PM | link to this | reply

This poem is full of love and care and I can relate ...

posted by Chilitree on May 24, 2009 at 3:58 PM | link to this | reply

The heart sure takes a lot.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 24, 2009 at 3:28 PM | link to this | reply