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Poignant close! I detected a bit of e e cummings! BRAVO!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 21, 2009 at 2:23 PM
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Such a bad poem
not shinning or shimmering
needs more symbolisim
and structure
i mean wake up
geez
You keep this up and someone's just gonna hafta come over there and slap you till' ya bounce.
"It's only a joke Ladies and Gentlemen".
Hey, i'd give you a little slap
if it would really help.
posted by
Sudanym_
on May 21, 2009 at 11:46 AM
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Try this
i'm posting on nearly all your stuff. Everybody look at May 14th on this blog.
posted by
Sudanym_
on May 21, 2009 at 11:28 AM
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In a similar way to Poe you psychologically ponder alienation with symbolic blocks . BCA, Bill*s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on May 20, 2009 at 12:07 PM
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