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Re: Re: lionreign

  thanks

posted by lionreign on May 27, 2009 at 7:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lionreign

lol, it's good!

posted by NiteTide on May 27, 2009 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lion, I truly love this , no doubt...

thank you Sue!!

posted by lionreign on May 21, 2009 at 1:25 AM | link to this | reply

lion, I truly love this , no doubt...

posted by 9STAR on May 20, 2009 at 7:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Lion

Thank you, my friend - I am glad you like it

posted by lionreign on May 20, 2009 at 7:41 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444

Thank you, I suspect that we think similarly - I chose that word purely for the vibrancy it has for me too

posted by lionreign on May 20, 2009 at 7:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: ...chocolate night melts into morn..

Thanks Kathy, I was rather proud of that line, I must admit.  The image came to me as I was half asleep

posted by lionreign on May 20, 2009 at 7:35 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

thank you so much

posted by lionreign on May 20, 2009 at 7:33 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Merkie

Thank you so much

posted by lionreign on May 20, 2009 at 7:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: hardilaziz

Thanks!

posted by lionreign on May 20, 2009 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lion

Thanks Troosha - glad it didn't disappoint

posted by lionreign on May 20, 2009 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

Re: NiteTide

Erm... that's good, right?

posted by lionreign on May 20, 2009 at 6:54 AM | link to this | reply

Lion

it seems your chocolate night caused quite a stir! I have to admit it is an amazing thought; excellent work my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on May 20, 2009 at 4:55 AM | link to this | reply

I loved chocolate night! My first thought was to be more watchful and find it too! So cool on the imagery all the way through! The close with using carnival produced such vibrant mental images for me! sam

posted by sam444 on May 19, 2009 at 2:50 PM | link to this | reply

...chocolate night melts into morn..

Great line..nice poem..Kathy

posted by Maryka77 on May 19, 2009 at 12:59 PM | link to this | reply

Deliciously romantic Lion... your words are as sweet at that "chocolate night" that melted into your dawn... Excellent and inspiring :-)

posted by Sinome on May 19, 2009 at 11:39 AM | link to this | reply

Emerging from a cacoon into dawn,superb! Your imagery entrances!

posted by merkie on May 19, 2009 at 10:11 AM | link to this | reply

March on!

posted by hardilaziz on May 19, 2009 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply

Lion

There's the "love" we've come to expect from you... flowing and delicious.

posted by Troosha on May 19, 2009 at 8:58 AM | link to this | reply

hahaha...I don't know why but this poem is just LOUD for words!! 

posted by NiteTide on May 19, 2009 at 7:52 AM | link to this | reply